I am a student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. I am a year 6 and my teacher is Mrs Thorp. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Nathaniel I would be concerned if my sister hurt herself too. Thanks for sharing another great word of the week with us. Just like Mrs Cassidy comment, look out for the capitals and full-stops. Keep sharing your work
Hello Nathaniel,
ReplyDeleteThat is a good sentence. You are a nice brother. How many sisters do you have and are they younger than you?
What a nice brother you are Nathaniel.
ReplyDeleteJust remember that a sentence needs a capital letter to begin with and a full stop to stop with.
Hi Nathaniel
ReplyDeleteI would be concerned if my sister hurt herself too. Thanks for sharing another great word of the week with us. Just like Mrs Cassidy comment, look out for the capitals and full-stops.
Keep sharing your work